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Lianamir: /* October 2022 */

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‎October 2022

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‎October 2022

Lianamir at 16:01, 28 May 2024

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‎October 2022

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 Heads of families may appoint  designees for any of their functions, including participation in the familial legislative body. Time off for the annual session is however guaranteed.
 ==== scribblemyname — 9/25/22, 8:49 PM ====
-kigo crown<br>
+kigo crown<br><br>
 canopy is crown of branches and crown of leaves, families
 ==== scribblemyname — 9/26/22, 10:12 AM ====
 subordinate noun version of -ut does not trigger agreement nor accept adj. modifiers

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 ==== scribblemyname — 9/25/22, 7:52 AM ====
 Prompt notification of lineage is 2 years, barring demonstrable exigency. Without family or lineage means not in a family register and not in a record of lineage. The latter is tied to inalienable familial rights which cannot be denied even if a person is denied registry.
-Hligana is a nothing name. Family records are locked records, ministerial rather than unlocked or public.
+Hligana is a nothing name. Family records are locked records, ministerial rather than unlocked or public.<br>
-Only lineage families who intend to support Selected Applicants have a process for selecting them. Anyone can apply to the branches of any of the roots of society. Meishte is considered the tree.
+Only lineage families who intend to support Selected Applicants have a process for selecting them. Anyone can apply to the branches of any of the roots of society. Meishte is considered the tree.<br>
-IDs are issued by the Ministry of families and for a small fee, anyone can make inquiry for a cert of verification that someone is who they say.
+IDs are issued by the Ministry of families and for a small fee, anyone can make inquiry for a cert of verification that someone is who they say.<br>
-Promises to the Crown may be offered by any individual or family, which if approved, may receive stipend, permissions, or other form of approval to proceed.
+Promises to the Crown may be offered by any individual or family, which if approved, may receive stipend, permissions, or other form of approval to proceed.<br>
 Families who establish a register but provide no benefits to its members may be charged with fraud.
 ==== scribblemyname — 9/25/22, 8:07 AM ====
 Heads of families may appoint  designees for any of their functions, including participation in the familial legislative body. Time off for the annual session is however guaranteed.

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 ==== scribblemyname — 9/16/22, 4:58 AM ====
 You say you love me, but you seem... always careful not to touch me.<br>
 I'm not a creep. I'll touch you when you express interest in being touched.<br>
 Oh.<br>
 They talk on other topic - peopleness?<br>
 leans back and settles his head on Beram's thigh. B's eyes go wide, his fingers just slightly twitch, and the rest of him is very, very still.<br>
 Sata keeps talking a moment.<br>
 strangled sound, blushes<br>
 You have to remember: we're people. Then, That doesn't seem like interest. Scrunches his back to get up.<br>
 Beram's hand flies to the tips of Sata's hair. No, I—<br>
 delighted, Sata drops back down<br>
 Your hair is soft<br>
 I'm pretty sure all hair is soft<br>
 Didn't stop Beram from burying his hands in it like he'd been harboring an interest for much longer than he'd admit

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 ==== scribblemyname — 9/16/22, 4:58 AM ====
-You say you love me, but you seem... always careful not to touch me.
+You say you love me, but you seem... always careful not to touch me.<br>
-I'm not a creep. I'll touch you when you express interest in being touched.
+I'm not a creep. I'll touch you when you express interest in being touched.<br>
-Oh.
+Oh.<br>
-They talk on other topic - peopleness?
+They talk on other topic - peopleness?<br>
-leans back and settles his head on Beram's thigh. B's eyes go wide, his fingers just slightly twitch, and the rest of him is very, very still.
+leans back and settles his head on Beram's thigh. B's eyes go wide, his fingers just slightly twitch, and the rest of him is very, very still.<br>
-Sata keeps talking a moment.
+Sata keeps talking a moment.<br>
-strangled sound, blushes
+strangled sound, blushes<br>
-You have to remember: we're people. Then, That doesn't seem like interest. Scrunches his back to get up.
+You have to remember: we're people. Then, That doesn't seem like interest. Scrunches his back to get up.<br>
-Beram's hand flies to the tips of Sata's hair. No, I—
+Beram's hand flies to the tips of Sata's hair. No, I—<br>
-delighted, Sata drops back down
+delighted, Sata drops back down<br>
-Your hair is soft
+Your hair is soft<br>
-I'm pretty sure all hair is soft
+I'm pretty sure all hair is soft<br>
 Didn't stop Beram from burying his hands in it like he'd been harboring an interest for much longer than he'd admit
 ==== scribblemyname — 9/21/22, 1:59 PM ====
 update last chapter to incl. descr. of banquet hall

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 nkos. she thought he probably Knew she meant Mountain, though it wasn't the right word in either of their dialects. Quiet, his kisses sweet against her neck. He treated her like a teacup lover. She never reminded him she was absolutely utterly unbreakable. She liked to feel precious fragile cared for
 ==== scribblemyname — 9/15/22, 4:55 AM ====
-Srshe!
+Srshe! <br>
 We're not on duty yet, come back to bed
 pulls her back, flustered
 ==== scribblemyname — 9/16/22, 4:58 AM ====
 You say you love me, but you seem... always careful not to touch me.

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 ==== scribblemyname — 4/24/22, 8:18 PM ====
 Sata: We don't choose our children. We accept them.
 === October 2022 ===

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 === April 2022 ===
-=== 4/24/22 ====
+==== scribblemyname — 4/24/22, 8:02 PM ====
+Tren: I have met many small children. They are not like you.<br>
-scribblemyname — 4/24/22, 8:02 PM
+Benny: I take that as a compliment.<br>
 Clara nods solemnly in the background.
-scribblemyname — 4/24/22, 8:18 PM
+==== scribblemyname — 4/24/22, 8:18 PM ====
 Sata: We don't choose our children. We accept them.

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		+	=== April 2022 ===
		+
		+	=== 4/24/22 ====
		+
		+	scribblemyname — 4/24/22, 8:02 PM
		+	Tren: I have met many small children. They are not like you.
		+
		+	Benny: I take that as a compliment.
		+
		+	Clara nods solemnly in the background.
		+	scribblemyname — 4/24/22, 8:18 PM
		+	Sata: We don't choose our children. We accept them.

	=== October 2022 ===		=== October 2022 ===

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	lights. no. her soul recoiled from sudden, terrifying realization as she was in the most terrible moment possible rendered powerless		lights. no. her soul recoiled from sudden, terrifying realization as she was in the most terrible moment possible rendered powerless
		+
		+	scribblemyname — 10/04/2022 9:41 AM
		+	Early evening in the mountainous southern border of the War Clans. A vague purple-bluish light had settled over the series of sparsely wooded escarpments where the First Unit of the Elite had camped out to guard it.
		+
		+	Leshet remembered when the mountains sloped upward naturally, thick with piney trees. Now, she imagined she could smell the ancient lightning that had scored it and glassified so much of what once was sand. The scorch marks had faded over time, under sediment, but the forestation had yet to recover from that long ago battlefield. Leshet had been with the First Unit since her Recognition on graduating school.
		+
		+	She watched as a flare of heat and light found a member of the second squad, up the towering height of a scoutworthy tree. The phoenix flame turned person and Anae settled in behind the departing warrior to stand watch.
		+
		+	Higher still on the same tree, Leshet's squad leader Vetta clambered into position with a view of all the northward plain. His white hair wasn't due to age. Considering his grandfather, she assumed it signaled one of his inherited contracts with the gods.
		+
		+	Leshet was a white tiger mist, and she preferred to go on watch by overlapping her body with the previous watcher, healing any injuries they'd happened to acquire. Seheri mouthed a string surprised curses but moved silently out of the cleft of rock she'd occupied, leaving Leshet sitting in her place atop a thin bed of opportunistic lichen. The bulky shadow of Ikhankos, the last member of the first squad within the unit, joined Leshet, equally silently.
		+
		+	The southern mountains of the War Clans was their most important border, and even making peace with the Danni hadn't relieved the perpetual sense of tension among those who guarded it. Long habits of active skirmishing meant the Elite treated this post as ever ready to explode into violence.
		+	scribblemyname — 10/05/2022 8:59 AM
		+	tries solo first, can't use reflect for this
		+
		+	touched her in passing, calculating something other than do unto others what would otherwise happen to you
		+
		+	come by tonight
		+
		+	do you want to or not?
		+
		+	scribblemyname — 10/23/2022 4:38 PM
		+	Love and trust have to be earned. In Dutch we have a saying ‘vertrouwen komt te voet en gaat te paard’ which translate to trust comes on foot and goes on a horse. It means trust is hard to build but easy to lose.
		+	scribblemyname — 10/23/2022 4:50 PM
		+	What are you doing?
		+
		+	I burned a pot
		+
		+	So you're burying it? thoroughly amused
		+
		+	Well... I wasn't sure how to clean it
		+
		+	=== November 2022 ===
		+
		+	scribblemyname — 11/13/2022 3:28 PM
		+	what's a proper watch party without a proper crumpet?
		+	scribblemyname — 11/28/2022 7:23 PM
		+	ke
		+	vas
		+	givord
		+	irum
		+	mrt
		+	nekke
		+
		+	numbers 1-6 k2-nar
		+	scribblemyname — 11/28/2022 9:19 PM
		+	Small Tales: remembered things
		+
		+	=== December 2022 ===
		+
		+	scribblemyname — 12/02/2022 12:24 PM
		+	andntaa
		+	scribblemyname — 12/03/2022 8:51 PM
		+	setup, buildup, payoff
		+	flashbacks needed:
		+	only time before that Leshet cried
		+	Tayas receives proposal
		+	Saiyar's death
		+	scribblemyname — 12/11/2022 6:23 PM
		+	I exist, it's good
		+	scribblemyname — 12/14/2022 8:41 PM
		+	yonyunn morning day, dawning day, morning time, bright season, dawning season/era
		+	yun n. div. morning
		+	yunn adj. div. of morning, at morning
		+	scribblemyname — 12/15/2022 8:26 AM
		+	you don't have to pay me
		+	if you ever change your mind, come by anytime
		+	you have hours
		+	Red can let you in
		+
		+	...
		+
		+	chaining me to the restaurant now
		+	that's right. I keep getting a feeling from that kid that just won't go away
		+	farmer's market, no parental agreement, record it
		+	scribblemyname — 12/20/2022 4:53 PM
		+	it's bones on bones
		+	translator: it's an old city that has been built over the top of several times
		+	scribblemyname — 12/22/2022 11:36 AM
		+	sometimes you reach a point
		+	where you feel so hollow
		+	where the quiet whispers in
		+	what if tomorrow
		+	is just like what it was
		+	that yesterday
		+	you shrug your shoulders, smile
		+	that's why we pray
		+	scribblemyname — 12/28/2022 8:59 AM
		+	in the thick of troubles, it may not be obvious how all the pieces of God's plan fit together, but if you finish the story, you'll be glad to have trusted Him all along
		+	scribblemyname — 12/28/2022 6:59 PM
		+	85.05
		+	scribblemyname — 12/29/2022 3:07 PM
		+	1200's Turkish Ebru marbling, colored oil dropped and brushed on water, intricated organic patterns, feathering, twirls, fantastical swirling repeating patterns on paper, matte finish, decorative, beautiful, stunning --tile --ar 3:2 --style 800 --chaos 75 --seed 80 --upbeta --test --creative - Upscaled (Beta) by @unknown-user (fast)
		+	scribblemyname — 12/29/2022 8:39 PM
		+	a cluster of grasslands nestled bowls between the bold lines of mountain ranges
		+	scribblemyname — 12/31/2022 7:46 AM
		+	tencentarc/gfpgan – Replicate
		+	displate inprnt
		+	replicate.com