Challenge: Origfic Bingo - Revision history

Lianamir: /* bodyswap/bodyshare */

2017-12-05T21:17:38Z

‎bodyswap/bodyshare

2017-09-20T21:08:41Z

‎backstory/missing scene

2017-09-19T18:00:19Z

‎magic

2017-09-19T16:21:34Z

2017-09-19T03:13:42Z

‎magic

2017-09-18T23:10:26Z

‎Sand (drabble)

2017-09-18T22:55:24Z

2017-09-12T20:20:50Z

2017-09-12T20:18:04Z

‎Stay (ficlet)

2017-09-12T20:17:34Z

‎Stay (ficlet)

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← Older revision		Revision as of 18:00, 19 September 2017
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	“Don’t touch,” she whispered, then threw out an arm well clear and set the silvery fluid dancing in the air again to a little girl’s delight.		“Don’t touch,” she whispered, then threw out an arm well clear and set the silvery fluid dancing in the air again to a little girl’s delight.
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		+	==== [[The One (drabble)]] ====
		+
		+	They called it 'magic', this feeling that was supposed to overwhelm her when she finally met the one.
		+
		+	Air tossed another cheap paperback book across the room, narrowly missing Shadow's head. He shot her a raised brow glance from the dresser he was sitting on.
		+
		+	"Boring," she said tightly. "Unrealistic."
		+
		+	She picked up another book, then wondered why she bothered. She'd tried genre after genre, looking for something she could either relate to or believe in long enough to forget the things she related to.
		+
		+	She sighed, admitted quietly to Shadow, "He's not magic. He's ''real''."
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		+	It's what she wanted.

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 The sand got stuck between her fingers and toes. [[Skylight (Character)|Skylight]] studied the way it looked, barely paler than her skin, and let herself feel the grit.
-She remembered still the grit between her teeth, that got stuck in her eyes, when her braid came loose from how she’d wrapped it and whipped into her face when the desert winds blew fierce out on a harsher ocean of sand. She’d been a fighter than, if little more than a child.
+She remembered still the grit between her teeth, that got stuck in her eyes, when her braid came loose from how she’d wrapped it and whipped into her face when the desert winds blew fierce out on a harsher ocean of sand. She’d been a fighter then, if little more than a child.
 She waded out from under memory and stood on the front of an ocean of water instead.

← Older revision	Revision as of 22:55, 18 September 2017
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 [[Justus (Character)|Justus]] laughed before he even turned around. He ''had'' been trying to make space for her things. "Battery Acid."
-[[The Database (Character)|She]] slipped under his arm, let him kiss her temple without complaint for the sentiment. Usually, she preferred her own apartment in Kishet, but Justus lived in Riving, and his house was pleasant enough to visit, even stay at for weeks on end.
+She slipped under his arm, let him kiss her temple without complaint for the sentiment. Usually, she preferred her own apartment in Kishet, but Justus lived in Riving, and his house was pleasant enough to visit, even stay at for weeks on end.
 She wasn't really here to stay.
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 "No," he said. "You're alive. All of us are." Their entire team.
-But Battery Acid just huffed a tiny laugh. "For now."
+But [[The Database (Character)|Battery Acid]] just huffed a tiny laugh. "For now."
 She wasn't really here to ''stay''.